Saturday, July 12, 2014

Student Critique

Hey Kat, here is that crit I promised. This is based off of your #7. I wanted to get a stronger foreground, middleground,background separation. Also I wanted to get a good hero shot. We may need to work on the scale of the damsel a bit, but I like the design of this.


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  2. Thanks Erik, I really like what you did here. Especially how the damsel is placed.

    I took some photos based off this http://artofkatherine.blogspot.com/2014/07/photoshoot.html

    I'm having some trouble choosing which one works the best for the warrior on the boat. I'm also a little worried about whether the lighting makes sense.

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